It’s been a difficult couple of weeks for me. One of my cousins, and one of my all time favorite people, passed away rather suddenly and unexpectedly.
A cousin by marriage, I’ve known Dennis since I was ten years old. To me, he was just as much family as his wife. Dennis had a great sense of humor. He always went the extra mile for others, never expecting anything in return. Dennis was also an attorney. And the inspiration for Alex Montoya, the leading man in my second novel, The Deception. In fact, I dedicated The Deception to Dennis.
Like Dennis, Alex was a hard working attorney. He’s willing to do whatever it takes to get justice for leading lady, Carrie. Of course, there are significant differences between the character and his the real-life inspiration. Alex was thirty-something and single. He’s not necessarily looking for love. That’s a prerequisite for a lead character in a romance novel. However, his real life counterpart married his college sweetheart at a young age. Each is a unique individual.
In honor of Dennis, I’m including this brief excerpt from The Deception. Like Alex, Dennis was dedicated to his clients.
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After they ended the call Alex picked up the message sitting on his desk. It was from Louise’s attorney, Jack Collins, who called while he was out. He dialed the number and was immediately connected.
“Thanks for returning my call,” said Collins. “I’ve received the letter you faxed me this morning and I’ve already spoken to my client about it.”
“So what does she have to say? Is she willing to work with us to find out who really sent the photos to Gentry Magazine?”
As most of you probably know, I write sensual romance, and when Rob Resetar and I produce a book trailer it may include a brief romance scene, but it’s hardly porn. But don’t tell that to Amazon.
The Deception is the story of a woman who’s been exploited, and I’ve been using this book trailer video on Amazon for sometime to do book promotions. However, they are no longer allowing me to use it. Their “official” reason is that the file format is out of date. However, I have another book trailer in that same format, and it works perfectly, so I’m not buying it. Someone at Amazon didn’t like this book trailer, so they flagged it.
So, for your viewing pleasure, here’s the book trailer that Amazon banned.
While I wait for my latest romance novel, The Letter, to come back from the editor, I thought I’d do a minor edit on The Deception. The two stories are similar, and in the five years since I wrote The Deception, I’ve improved as a writer. I wanted to go back and tweak some of the text to make the story flow a little smoother. However, as I was working, I kept wondering where one of my scenes went. I recalled writing it, but I wasn’t seeing it. Short story long, it had somehow been overlooked when the book was typeset, and I had missed the error. Yikes!
Fortunately, it wasn’t a pivotal scene. In the missing chapter, one of the villains is arrested and carted off to jail. The villain has committed a serious crime. Thankfully, in a prior chapter, another character has come forward with enough evidence to guarantee a conviction. This meant it had already been established that the villain would end up in jail. Then, near the end of the book, the villain is seen appearing in court. The missing chapter, however, was a nice, “you had it coming,” moment. Readers would get to see the surprised villain put in handcuffs and hauled away.
The new, revised edition of The Deception, includes the missing chapter. It’s now available for the Amazon Kindle, and update the print edition will be available soon.
I’m doing a minor edit on an earlier novel, The Deception, while I wait for my editor to finish up my latest novel, The Letter. The two stories are similar. Those who have read The Deception will, no doubt, enjoy The Letter, and vice versa. I wrote The Deception in 2012. It was my second novel, and I’ve improved in my craft since then, so I wanted to do some fine tuning.
The story and its contents remain the same. Most readers won’t notice the editorial changes. I’ve removed some filler words and redundancies, and rephrased some of the dialog to make the characters’ points of view a little more clear.
The most noticeable change is the cover. Inspired by real-life stories of revenge porn, and the havoc it creates in people’s lives, The Deception is the story of a woman badly exploited in a profoundly ugly way. However, the original cover, shown above, has created some controversy as some have not understood the reason behind it. While still sexy, the new look is less controversial, and it blends well when displayed with my other titles.
The new, updated version will be available in early February.
The other day I was chatting with a friend who’s reading The Deception. She said she wanted to deck the boyfriend who dumps leading lady Carrie in the first chapter. This chapter was inspired by a real-life event.
A few years ago my friends and I visited Seaworld in San Diego. As we walked around the park we happened to pass by a well-dressed young lady sitting on a bench, sobbing her eyes out. A young man, most likely her boyfriend, stood next to her, a very serious look on his face. As we hurried past I realized he’d brought her there to dump her, thinking she wouldn’t cause a scene.
I’ll never know for sure what happened, but that picture stayed in my mind. And you know what happens when something stays in a novel writer’s mind, don’t you? It comes out in a story. In this instance, it became the inspiration for the opening scene of The Deception, but with a different location. This time the lady is dumped at The Arizona State Fair. Her boyfriend also thinks dumping her in public means she won’t cause a scene, but he’s wrong. Very wrong. Dumping someone in public only adds more humiliation to the person being dumped.
Inspiration can from anywhere and everywhere, oftentimes when I least expect it.
We’re still hard at work for the new book trailer for The Deception. Today videographer Rob Resetar shot two more scenes; a love scene between Carrie, the leading lady, and Scott, one of the antagonists, and the photo shoot scene. The photo shoot happens early in the novel. It’s the watershed event that shapes the rest of the story.
We still have a few more scenes to film. With any luck, the book trailer will be complete right after the first of the year. In the meantime please enjoy this except from The Deception about the photo shoot. MM
an excerpt from The Deception
Carrie woke up to her ringing cellphone. She rolled over and scooped it up from the floor.”Hello.” Her voice sounded groggy.
“So what the heck is going on with you?” asked the woman on the other end of the line.
To read the rest of this excerpt please click on the link below.
They’re out there. The liars. The cheaters. The scumbags. The players. The married men who put themselves out as single men. And, like the predators they are, they like to prey on unsuspecting single women, looking for lasting relationships.
Scott Andrews, the antagonist in my romance novel, The Deception, is one of those predators. Handsome and charming, Scott can, and does, pass himself off as a single man. He presents himself as the perfect catch for a single woman looking for her soulmate. And, unfortunately, for the woman, she has no idea that Scott’s married.
A mutual friend introduces Scott to leading lady Carrie, the leading lady. As usual, he presents himself as a single man, and he hasn’t just fooled Carrie. He’s also fooled their mutual friend, Allison. Not only does Allison believe that Scott is single, she also thinks he might be a good match for Carrie, who’s recovering from an earlier breakup. Scott quickly takes advantage of her vulnerability, but Carrie will soon realize things aren’t adding up. By then it will too late, and the consequences will leave her life shattered.
Scott is inspired by someone I once knew, as well as stories other women have told me. He may be a fictional character, but there are, unfortunately, many real life Scotts out there. Stay safe, ladies.
We’ve all known people like this. People who are sweet as pie to your face and pretend to be your best friend when, in reality, their only interest is in using you. With friends like that who needs an enemy, right?
Meet Louise Dickenson, one of the antagonists in The Deception. Louise is more than happy to be your friend, provided you have something of benefit to her. This makes her a great antagonist. She’s the kind of woman we love to hate.
Louise is a semi-retired photographer. Years before, she shot the print ads of leading lady Carrie when she was a child model. The two forged a friendship, or so Carrie thought. Later on, Carrie became a commercial photographer herself, and Louise mentored her.
Louise is now an art photographer. She’s just picked up a private commission for a series of a female nudes. She also has a show coming up at a local art gallery. Louise plans on including the nude photos in her upcoming show. But first, she needs a model. Knowing that Carrie is down on her luck, Louise decides to help her by offering her a well paying modeling gig. But when Carrie hesitates, Louise skillfully calms her fears by convincing Carrie that she really is trying to help her. The experience, however, leaves Carrie feeling manipulated and exploited. And as events unfold, she’ll discover that Louise was never her friend.
Louise is a fictitious character, loosely based on a family member who was also a master manipulator.
That’s a fellow author said to me the other day. Of course, she didn’t mean it literally, although she had a point. Some of the things we novel writers do to our characters is just plain mean. Then again, some of those characters have it coming.
I was telling her about Scott, an antagonist in The Deception. Scott isn’t the nicest guy on the planet. He’s a married man who puts himself out as a single guy, and his actions have hurt a lot of people, especially Carrie, my leading lady. Once she and her friends realize Scott’s stories aren’t adding up she ditches him. I planned on writing him out of the story at that point, but then someone else told me, no, I couldn’t just write him off so quickly. Readers would expect him to be punished for what he did, and they’d be disappointed if he were able to simply walk away. So, I took the advice.
Scott is later arrested for a crime he didn’t commit, and he gets his comeuppance in the form of a humiliating strip search. I told my fellow author how I went online and read testimonials by real people who’ve had this experience, and I based Scott’s story on those real-life accounts. That’s when she looked at me and said, “You novel writer’s are evil.”
Well, what can I say? She wrote a memoir. I write fiction.