It’s Jarring and It’s Life Shattering

and it can happen in an instant

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I’m starting to get some feedback on my latest novel, The Deception. For the most part it’s been good. There is, of course, some minor criticism here and there, but that’s to be expected. After all, none of us can please all readers all the time. One comment, however, was about the sudden end to one of the characters. The reader believed it was too jarring and too over the top.

Warning! Spoiler Alert!

One of the characters is killed in a traffic accident, and no, I don’t warn you about it. In the real world tragic events happen without warning, and for the victims or their survivors, life is never the same. It’s a reality I know all too well. About ten years ago I lost a young cousin to a car crash, and it was completely unexpected. One minute he was a healthy twenty-year-old man with his whole life ahead of him. The next minute he was gone forever. 

My decision to kill a character in a car accident may indeed seem over the top for some readers. Others, however, disagree. The character in question was an antagonist, so they felt vindicated. Her sudden end was also the direct result of her own actions.

Tragedy happens all too often. The point I’m making is to never take life for granted. It really can come to a sudden end, without warning.

Marina Martindale

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